ONCE APOND A TIME story challenge

ok guys, we all know this one. We keep a story going as long as possible.

OK....starting now





ONCE apon a time, in a cosy stone cabin, lived a lovely girl.

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44 replies since 10th November 2008 • Last reply 10th November 2008

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This lovely girl her name was Lolly. She loved to make all sorts of candy. Suddenly there was a knock on the door.

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And there standing was this wonderfully hansom man. She asked his name, and with a deep throated laugh, he pronounced he was Willie Wonka's illegitamate son, and he was here to offer her a chance to work at the Willie Wonka Candy factory and create new and different num-nums

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And there standing was this wonderfully hansom man. She asked his name, and with a deep throated laugh, he pronounced he was Willie Wonka's illegitamate son, and he was here to offer her a chance to work at the Willie Wonka Candy factory and create new and different num-nums

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Reply #4:

Lolly's eyes lit up, this was the chance of a lifetime for one such as herself! She promptly asked; "Why sir, you are my dream come true, whatever do I have to do?"

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With a laugh and a giggle, he walked off through the rain, "give me a day, and i'll see what we can do." Without another world, he was gone for that day.

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Lolly began to pack her bags getting ready for her new adventure. Filled with happiness she had to tell someone. Then she heard a crash from the other room. When she ran to see what it was she was suprise to see a horror disfigured man. "oh no a zombie!"

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Reply #7:

thinking quickly, Lolly grabbed some leftover spaghetti and threw it at the zombie, hoping it would mistake it for brains!

(lol!)

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Reply #8:

the zombie wasn't fooled by the spaghetti though & quickly advanced on her, licking his lips at the thought of making her his next meal!

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Reply #9:

Lolly was frozen with fear. just as the zombie was about to grab her, Willie Wonka's illegitimate son breaks through a window and tackles the zombie to the floor.

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Reply #10:

After an increasingly brutal fight to the death, and a wicked bite from the Zombie, Willie Wonka's illegitimate son wins, and completely dismembered the body. As Lolly was fixing up the wound on his arm, she noticed that where there should be clots of blood forming a scab, there is what seems to be Crystalized sugar...

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Reply #11:

she is surprised and wonders what to do.

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Reply #12:

Before she can even think, there's another sound outside, and she sees a shadow pass the window... was that a... candy cane?

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Reply #13:

curious, she crept towards the window to take a look

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Reply #14:

Lolly suddenly finds herself face to face with Mr. Mint from Candy Land. his red stripes running in the rain, dripping from the blade of his candy axe like blood and pooling at his feet.


(thought our story could use some pics ;)

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