Punkish Manga Girl Drawing

yey for the over-use of cross-hatching!
please excuse my poor pictures, my scanner doesnt work :/
..well my lack of artist equipment, knowledge and skill hasnt stopped me from believing that i might have a chance in the manga competition ^^ ive never shown anyone my drawings before but i know that the people here on co+k will be nice enough not to laugh at me...right? XD
well by the end of drawing this, the side of my hand was covered in pen because i didnt have enough sense to realise that i should lift my hand to stop rubbing the picture...so as you can see, there are pen rubbings all over it -_-' jeez, im clueless